J.Gillibrand

Joe Gillibrand

Joe Gillibrand - Difficult kit to make a unique design, the cut of the clothes looks nice, although I'm not really a fan of striped sleeves on only one side... The shape of the template looks fantastic but I think there are too many unnecessary seams.

LokoLoko - I never let the template used affect my judgement of the design but I've almost ruled out your kit given your template is a direct copy (I can even see the outline of the Adidas stripes on the socks)... Putting all this aside, you've actually made a nice design. The use of gold is nice and adds a subtle elegance to the kit, but you should have used gold trim on the shorts and socks too though. It's also good to see a more interesting collar.

Vote: [b]LokoLoko[/b] - but please man, make your own template!

Another tough one.
Joe's single striped sleeve swings it in lokoloko' favour though, sorry joe.
Can't see how that is an adidas template though, an unfortunate use of shading on socks looks a bit like three stripes other than that looks unique to me.

[b]Joe[/b]. Hard to do anything different with a Monaco shirt, but that striped sleeve is brilliant. Nice kit from Loko, but the gold trim cheapens the kit slightly for me. (Nothing wrong with the template though)

@Smn Jms Dsn Thank you for the feedback Si, it's always good to have some!

LokoLoko

joe gulla

Hard one.... Joe

Loko

joe gillibrand

[b]Joe[/b]

joegillibrand

@joegillibrand No probs! I know that everyone goes to a lot of effort to get these comp kits done so I figure it's the least I can do to acknowledge that.

LokoLoko

Joe, hands down.

gulla

Joe 11 - 5 loko.

added my vote for joe's. @Loko, solid kit as stated by others in here, but i'd suggest trying to spice it up a bit in the details. I wont go into the presentation because i already have before, to be fair. I think a conventional template would give you the freedom to express ideas with greater detail because they physically show better. Coming from somebody whos used that kind of template, its really best as a companion to a flat piece. I'm thinking something like Tappei's, I wouldn't suggest that you go take his ideas, but he shows his kits well that way, and maybe it'll inspire you.

Thanks for coming back in the league, guys.

Thanks moom, I'll try to do something better next time. :-)

@AlexCont11 Dont look at it that way! Its not like your work isn't 'good enough', i'd just try to make something more personal, it'll just naturally perform better that way. :lol:

@moom I know what you mean, so I though my work was good, I meant that I'll try to do a better presentation for Design Football League :D