Without red-clack strip will be nicer.

Ah, I went off the current principles of their design.
I could have done a better job on the kerning though to be honest...

Fulham have never played with a Sash before (at least on the home), but it does look right for Fulham.

The Sash is the only distinctive feature of the shirt except for feature on the back below the collar, otherwise it would be totally generic, and you could swap adidas for Kappa (current maker) or any other without making it look wrong, given the lack of three stripes.

By the way, what is that feature on the back of the shirt?

I understand. Generic can be said about many teams though, what I went for was a clean look that I think fits Fulham rather nice.

I will definitely try it with a few different manufacturers.

The back is a lily, one of F.FC's nicknames is 'The Lilywhites'.

mmm like it, simple, but, like it :-)