I love the design, and the way it flows well from the front to the back. But I agree the blue is too bright and the white is hard to make out.

Another great design here, just I feel the colours let it down.

The blue is just too bright for a Júbilo kit, the number and name is hard to see also and making the Puma logo gold just makes it a bit weirder.

I always think that using 4 colours on a shirt is very hard to get away with.

Please keep posting your work!