The design is nice but the canary looks more like a bird of prey. the shape of the beak doesn't look right.

The eye also does not look like it belongs on a canary, as it should be round. Making the beak triangular and the eye round would improve this a lot.

I absolutely love the design, the entire concept is great. I don't remember seeing the club symbol coming off the crest like you did. Simple and easy on the eye. Amazing!

Probably my favourite redesign on this site.
I get the comments about the beak & eye, so it could be tweaked, but it's a brilliantly simple, elegant (and much needed) redesign.